I can't guarantee for the quality, as my writing style was different, different characters, etc., but I love this story too much to give up on it completely. And I think the revision improved it enough to make it enjoyable. If you like the series, give it a try! (You can always stop reading, after all XD)
It is, admittedly, a bit Sue-ish, which is again a left-over from my writing style at the time. I mean, this thing is almost ten years old now! *stares* Wow...I feel old. *shot* But yes, I've been trying, in my revision, to make the characters a bit more IC, and give them different personalities, rather than the mash-up they were in the original draft.
Thank you for your comment, though♥. *still giggling*
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I can't guarantee for the quality, as my writing style was different, different characters, etc., but I love this story too much to give up on it completely. And I think the revision improved it enough to make it enjoyable. If you like the series, give it a try! (You can always stop reading, after all XD)
It is, admittedly, a bit Sue-ish, which is again a left-over from my writing style at the time. I mean, this thing is almost ten years old now! *stares* Wow...I feel old. *shot* But yes, I've been trying, in my revision, to make the characters a bit more IC, and give them different personalities, rather than the mash-up they were in the original draft.
Thank you for your comment, though♥. *still giggling*